Your film looks beautiful. Not sure what you're shooting on but keep using that camera. In some of your scenes though, use motivated lighting to take it up a notch. One example: Sitting on the hood scene, if you would have put a little light off to the right, motivated from the building that would have given them a little light on one side of their faces. The background is perfectly lit along with everything else. That's all you would have needed to make that camera really work for you.